by brucewayneegypt
not exactly an erotic story. but more like diving into the author's mind. the title did make it clear.
expected more, still happy to read something relatable.
Beautiful words describing the desires of many sons/daughters.
your recent stories have been pure rubbish...
Just stop being a pain!!!!
Sometimes , an imagination will get away from us . Then again , there are times that is all we have to go on . Mine kept me sane , somewhat .
Therefore I wish you all the luck .
WHY!!!! Why did I waste my time reading this? It was the worst story I have ever read on this site!!!!!
Nice fantasy story and sex with a relative should only remain that, a fantasy like all teenage boys because too many a rapey and delusional.
I honestly felt this was a good story. This is actually just how one’s imagination would be. Definitely not a piece that deserved to bring the writer so much hate.
the story is just above average and nothing great but what surprised me is some of the comments i saw here. it is always good to be critical but most of the comments look personal.