All Comments on 'Immortal Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
SO GOOD.

I really like these stories and hope they do not come to an end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
lovin this story

I can't wait to read more. P.S. I like the preview for the next chapter. It's almost like watching the trailer for the next episode of your favorite tv show.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

It seems kind of strange that the Duke lets Gabriella and Lothie stay with him. Does he know what they are, spending their days hidden in their room? I think braking all of the furniture and such would have raised a few questions, but this is a fiction story, so be it. On to the next chapters.

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