All Comments on 'Immortal Love'

keep the stories coming like to read part 2 if possible

Nicely written and I love the Indian context. It sound real story and so more exciting . I am suspicious and wish that since the wife was dom in lesbian relationship and also love the feminine version of husband so she must have masculine nature and if author can detailed about that also can be good sequel to this story . I mean the details of how wife start changing in her true masculine persona e.g . Has already have lots of body hair and stop shaving , comparing her body hair and strength to the new wife and doing romantic humiliation which exited both of them .

Thank you for your valuable feedback. :) Will try my best to add your angle in upcoming parts.

I don;t understand. The first thing she did was violate the second rule.

sharing their private life with some one else by bringing in some one to do the makeup

Nency didn't violate the second rule intensionally. She needed Mona's help, as it was lockdown, so all necessary arrangements won't be possible without her help, plus Nency took enough care not to expose Amin's private parts to her friend.