All Comments on 'Impregnating His Sister-In-Law'

Needs a sequel.

Wanted a story, not an advertising tease!

I like it! Could use some more about the wife. Some development, some escalation, some dialogue, something about her perspective. Now she's crying in the other room, how will she feel if they make her sit on the bed while they do it? If they make her clean him up after? The threesome tease has me thinking there may be more story coming after this.

Wife must come in the room and say "sis, you owe me for loaning my stud to you".

After they settle in their apartment, she may discover her new husband and her new self. Then one day she may say to her sister "I wave off what you owe to me and thank you for enriching our life"

More. Where is part2?

This looks like a not-very-subtle attempt to advertise your stories for payment.

Was going to like it before it became an ad.

Non existent web site.

"You know you can't impregnate me with a limb dick, right?". This sentence brings up visions of an arm or a leg with a dick on the end of it. I strongly suggest a copy editor to prevent howlers like this. If this is supposed to be advertising for commercial writing, it fails.

"A red handprint forms on her ass cheek where I hit her. My ball draws up. Holy shit. I COULD HAVE SWORN I HAD TWO WHEN I STARTED"!