All Comments on 'Impregnating the Galaxy Ch. 29'

Thank you. Curious what happened to Hex?

Damn the end?! Thanks for the story. Whats next for you?

This is okay.

This has been a great sci-fi series of great imagination. With wonderful characters and an engaging story line, it is a great read from start to finish. While sad to see it end, the good news is that its author is very talented, so readers can look forward to more great stories, should the author decide to keep writing, which this reviewer earnestly hopes will be the case. Five stars, not only for this final chapter, but for the entire story.

Thank you nerdman009! It's taken a colossal effort, but it was time to wrap the story up. As for what's next, I am working on a massive new story! It's already being released on my Patreon, though the public releases are going to begin tomorrow. There is a ton of information about it in the link in my bio.

As for the Anonymous reviewer below, I truly appreciate your kind words! Based off of the way you write, I'm going to guess that you're the same individual who has reviewed many of my other chapters. While it's unfortunate that I can't see your name, and thus address you specifically, I hope you know that your support has encouraged me to work far harder on my writing. Thank you very much!

Concluding the skillful blending of hard sci-fi and porn. The last line reminds me of that of the novelization of 2001 A Space Odyssey and leaves open a revisit to Dorian's previous and new dimensions.

Hey dude this was a great ending and like I have a story idea if you wanna know what it is and it's like impregnating the galaxy but in a fantasy world instead

Hey dude this is such a great story and I have a story idea if you wanna hear it it's like this story but more of in a fantasy world.

Alexander97, thank you very much! That's actually exactly what I have planned :)

And Anonymous, I'd be very happy to hear your idea. I'm actually working on a fantasy story now, which will be posted soon. The first chapter is currently pending for admins to review.

Well great and what it's about is where this traveler who is searching for monsters that have interacted with his father and mother before and where the monsters are in fact girls who have monster attributes and where when they see the son of the parents who had great sexual pleasure for them they make him have sex with them to get them pregnant and the first monster girl is a lamia which is a snake person so what do you think and also on a new chapter of this it's where he travels to an island where females are being possessed by demons and it's like Scooby Doo 2002 movie with the spooky island demons

And by the way my name is Gabe so like I'm not trying to say my full name just something to go by since I wanna remain anonymous and all that and stuff. So hopefully that you'll do the story idea of mine or if not then the ideas I wanna help you add into if you are ok with it

Anonymous(Gabe), that sounds interesting, though unfortunately I don't have any plans on including lamias. Though if that changes I'll let you know!

Ok then and like what about dryads there plant ladies like in the Witcher look em up and you'll know what I'm saying and there so sexy that they seek humanoid males to procreate with and take little girls and orphan girls into there forest and use a special water to turn them into dryads to expand there numbers and how the transformation is done is after they've drunk the water, they are then placed into a plant like cocoon and after a few hours or days they emerge with green skin and sometimes red hair and some look like poison ivy from Arkham Asylum. So what do you think of this instead of lamias

Anonymous, I do have a species in my new series that is somewhat similar called Lanthians.

Oh cool and like just call me Gabe from now on and I'll send some more creature ideas for you to use if your interested

Sounds great Gabe, feel free to email me any time! (MrGreen10E@gmail.com)

MrGreen103, your imagination and story writings have been fabulous. Others can, maybe drop hints to how they want a story to be (but should try and learn like you to write and express themselves). But the bottom line is, you have on your own, or with some help created a story that; for my part, I really enjoyed and looked forward to coming home to read. Thanks. I like the other two spin off's also "Dorian's Descendants" and "Vaid Empire - Conquest". Thanks and I look forward to your imaganitive and creative story writings in the years to come I hope.

Regards

Divway

Divway, I genuinely appreciate your support!

I loved the story! Here's some constructive feedback:

- There is a pattern of grammatical errors, such as comma splices and incorrect possessive/plural forms. Paying attention to avoiding that will improve your writing.

- its = possessive; it's = it is

- whose = possessive; who's = who is

Awesome series you put together

Loved all the sex parts

[29.12.22]

Series Excellente!

Great world building, character development, engaging situations, and well concluded stories.

The ONE niggle I have is that by Chapter 28 when we meet his dad I get HEAVY Guardians of the Galaxy 2 vibes - with not quite direct parallels...but strong overall pastiches with the relationship of Dorian/Drukalmund and Star Lord/Ego.

Buut overall for the series 11/10!!!!!

a great story sad to see it end well told.....