All Comments on 'Impulse - Results Pt. 08'

On each corner of the apartment was a bedroom, just as originally planned. However each bedroom was connected by a jack-and-jill bathroom. (So that would mean four bathrooms and no windows for the central area.) ..... The center of the apartment was mostly open but separated into sections that all radiated away from the elevator that was thankfully already located in one corner of the room. (So who's bedroom is the elevator in?) ..... The final section was the living area ... It had the most amazing views of both the city and the water...(How is this possible with bathrooms connecting all of the bedrooms? Do the bedrooms and bathrooms have glass walls?)

Your story has many admirable features, but many missed edits as well, some of which grate quite a bit.