All Comments on 'In a Bottle... Ch. 02'

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John BlackhawkJohn Blackhawkover 13 years ago
interesting

an interesting contiuation to the story i look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please continue

Story starts out well- Please continue !!!!

MarshalJon13MarshalJon13over 13 years ago
Excellent Tale, but more magic please

A great continuation, though I do hope to see Alan use more of the genies' magic in future tales.

glib24glib24about 13 years ago

I'd really like to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Awe Man!

You should of had him release them all! Then you could have had the pissed off genie overlord threaten him for unbalancing the universe or something, at which point everyone he freed would defend him and make him King of the Djinn:)

macleenmacleenover 9 years ago
i like it

i like the twist, i wan't more

zl00pedragl0verzl00pedragl0verover 7 years ago
Beyond what I imagined!!

This story is beyond what I imagined with a djinn. Something I'd fantasize about !!

VorstenVorstenover 5 years ago
odd

Odd that he appears to have freed his first genie out of sympathy, but when he gets 3 more he just seems to have them join a harem.

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Did he free the other three genies?

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