All Comments on 'In a Dark Theater - Final'

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ICU81I812ICU81I8124 months ago

Nicely paced, well written, ending could have been a bit longer but great story. 5/5

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

You're back! Great addition to your already awesome submissions to this site.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

so glad to have you back with another awesom addition! wouldve enjoyed this being even more drawn out but thats just because i enjoy it so much tbh

soldier4_1soldier4_14 months ago

very good, still needs another update

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

More stories!

BlackBookTalesBlackBookTales4 months ago

A fun read! To be honest, I want to see more of the old fat man and young beautiful wife when she's pregnant and when they actually have the baby just to see how things go for them.

NoIcant4nowNoIcant4now4 months ago

Started out great but ended lame!

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

what a great story well told enjoyed so much Thank you

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April 12, 2024 Readers, Jennifer's Vacation Part 05 is live. Parts 06 and 07 are finished and I decided not to wait to post them. I'll hit publish and we'll see how long it takes the moderators to approve them. I'm working on part 2 of "Faith in the Apocalypse." st0rmbringer

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