by st0rmbringer
Nicely paced, well written, ending could have been a bit longer but great story. 5/5
so glad to have you back with another awesom addition! wouldve enjoyed this being even more drawn out but thats just because i enjoy it so much tbh
A fun read! To be honest, I want to see more of the old fat man and young beautiful wife when she's pregnant and when they actually have the baby just to see how things go for them.