All Comments on 'In a Parking Garage'

by Purple Dragonfly

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ParisWatermanParisWatermanabout 13 years ago
Great story, except ...

for the last paragraph. I mean, "Your friends were sure you would be a wild fuck...." leaves her attacker vulnerable to all sorts of reprisal.

Better if he just kicked her out of the van and took off.

Even if she enjoyed his rape - and it was rape - she wasn't going to invite him over for another round. I wish you had ended it differently. 5 starts tho.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Lucky guy

..I bet this whore loved being fucked like this...

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