All Comments on 'In Charge Ch. 01'

Lovely story and hot too.

Any thoughts on posting this on celebritystorylibrary.com? I'm sure you would get a lot more attention there than on literotica. This story of yours definitely deserves praise.

Once again, fantastic story and I hope to read more from you. :-)

First off, I didn't know she had a daughter.

Secondly that was some great description of the positions with the sex.

Can't wait for more.

From the last scene: "Her legs slid off my shoulders, and she licked her ankles behind my back."

What a difference it made to leave out one little letter. This was quite interesting and funny to try and visualize.