All Comments on 'In Charge Ch. 01'

From the last scene: "Her legs slid off my shoulders, and she licked her ankles behind my back."

What a difference it made to leave out one little letter. This was quite interesting and funny to try and visualize.

First off, I didn't know she had a daughter.

Secondly that was some great description of the positions with the sex.

Can't wait for more.

Lovely story and hot too.

Any thoughts on posting this on celebritystorylibrary.com? I'm sure you would get a lot more attention there than on literotica. This story of yours definitely deserves praise.

Once again, fantastic story and I hope to read more from you. :-)