All Comments on 'In Chastity Ch. 01'

Needs better proofreading. Major pronoun issues.

Learn to use pronouns.

I normally can read stories where the pronouns flip or a slip up but in this story it was very confusing.

Seriously? Mixing pronouns throughout made it impossible to read. Pick one - he or she.

The part about the fitting was very confusing. You need an editor.

Obviously not proof read or edited. Very confusing with miss used pronouns.

The author should have proof read the before publishing it makes it very confusing to read.