All Comments on 'In Dreams She Came Pt. 05'

I liked the story, great read. France was a surprise to me, not knowing this fact. You made me do research, lol, thank you. The demons and Lazarus was a surprise, Lilith I heard about. So this is Act 1, interesting.

Completed story 5*

One great story. I can not wait for the next chapter. Krieg said the darkness was coming for him when he dies. Does this mean Lazerus will end his life and he will go over to the dark side? Will Chris be able to keep Jenny from being processed by the demons and their minions(KAT,etc)? I can not wait for the next chapter to see what Chris does to protect Jenny and his plan for killing the demons. Wardmaster91D70

So in Act 2, we get glimpses into the past, as well as continuing the story...

Thanks for the great support.

kB

Mona having sex soon with him I want to see what she will do to him

While I was a bit disappointed that there wasn't a whole lot of sex in this chapter, I'm enjoying this tale and where it's going. I do hope the demons get their payback in the end for messing with poor Jenny and Chris, and I'm sure you'll do a great job in the chapters to come/cum. Ha!

Thanks KB! Looking forward to the next part.

One of the best stories in some time. Please keep it going

Working on Act 2.

I have read several different stories here. Yours is the first I would call a true narrative. Yes, there is sex. But you also seem to want to tell a good story.

Nice job!