All Comments on 'In Hanoi Pt. 01'

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amalgammamalgammover 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks Wendy

Glad you enjoyed it! I'm rather busy with work as of now, so don't know when the next part will be updated, but I hope you enjoy it when it does come out :)

Wendy212Wendy212over 5 years ago
A nice read

A pleasant little story, with a good ending. It's is what someone once called "a slice of life". In my opinion, however. it could do with a little trimming, something that someone else could do (as writers,including myself can't always see where the trimming should be done.)

I'm looking forward to another story by this author.

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I dabble in writing here and there. Relatively new to erotica, so please do go easy on me :)

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