All Comments on 'In Maggie's Chambers'

I don't know, hard to say, entirely too short and left unfinished. A one page story is not a chapter, you had plenty of room for more. It was okay but nothing to write home about, I won't bother with a part two.

Hope there is more to this tale. While it is not a story line I would usually follow, I will give you the benefit of the doubt and look for the next part. It could be hot.

Why does it seem most critical comments are left by "anonymous". Once again they hardly ever offer any constructive criticism or suggestions for the author to improve his/her writing.

All the makings of a good yarn. Can't wait till the next chapter. Tahnks.

lovely

Great story, great writing, looking forward to the next chapter!!

Really looking forward to part 2. This has the potential to be a great story.