All Comments on 'In Over His Head Ch. 12'

Not much going on in this short two page story.

@anon did you read the other 11? otherwise I don't think there is much here for you sorry xD

i love it and it makes me happy, german y

Happy to see the next chapter is up, but it’s too short! Hope to see 13 up soon!!! Love your work!

Hope you keep at it,and that you find a dependable partner soon.

Well... As much I like that the story evolves, I'm still bit annoyed that the story took us away from the boar... and Bernadette... Yes she might be bit rape'y and not really taking in to account her "victims" feelings, then again so far I see her as the love of my life... well allmost...

While I'm not that familiar with Skyrim, I actually had to do some googling to get completely figured out "who what where" just to get the general understanding of the world. but thankfully the story is good enough to be understandable withuot such knowlege (Some fanfic's are completely incomprihesible withuot google or knowledge of the original world.)

Only thing I'm slightly sorry to see is that there hasnt been any updates recently. but I hope to see the "full story"

Glad you love Bernadette! I do too! and don't worry I have a lot planned for her, and it's not all comedy relief either xD She actually has one of the deepest char transformations in the whole story arch and you will find out things about her (and others) to help explain why she is like she is and make you care about her even more <3

I love this story, please don't take to long its like a smoker wanting another smoke I could say more if my fingers didn't from arthritis so I can't wait for the next chapter

When's the rest coming..?

I love the story so when are you going to write some more it's been awhile since you wrote 12th chapter,you left off with every thing hanging like mon and mov.P.S.it's been over two years or do you still write I hope you do because you have a good talent to be able to make a good novel.If you decide to make this story into a novel i'm buying it.Keep up the good work

i'm here like every week hoping for an update.. in any case, thank you so much for the first 12 parts :)

good chapter keep it up and I will see you next chapter😀

There's a lot of open-ended storylines. I hope the series is continuing. Thank you!