All Comments on 'In Service of the Queen Ch. 05'

You captured the party atmosphere beautifully. Five stars for that, and a bonus star for the original song. The stanza starting 'Now I stare at my closet' was particularly good. I felt the emotion in the words.

That was so fucking enjoyable. I wish everyone could have special moments, like the one Addie, Tiara, and their friends just shared, on a regular basis - but then I guess they wouldn’t be quite so special. I’m going to savor this special chapter for as long as I can. Wonderful Offering Wax. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Smile ….. ever been to munich and the worlds largest beer festival ‚The Octoberfest‘? …. You described a little part of it giggle 🤭 …. In Munich nearly everyone will be drunk especially in those big beer tents and their you will have the live music bands too ….. party all over for fortnight ….. nut the girlie party sounds really peaceful and happy and this will be so much more fun and exciting

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Another stonkingly great chapter Wax , I mean whispers of a secret cheese cave, pretzels, beer and song all with friends what's not to love . Your song that Tiara sang was absolutely dripping with emotion and beautifully written , now I'm off to get some beer and raise a glass or two 🍻🍻. Thank you Wax. Jc