Enjoyed it all the way through. I was expecting When Rachel said "I have something to show you" Gloria would walk in the room, as Rachel says meet my mother or meet my my Mistress. you did a great job with this one.
I'm male in my 60's who has often dreamed of being captured by a sexy female and subjected to HER desires. Also i LOVE stockings! It's NEVER happened btw, so my stories are ALL products of my imagination, and NOT from experience. More's the pity!