All Comments on 'In Space Everyone Screams Ch. 04'

Good story for last 1 1/2 pages. I was totally confused at opening section. I couldn’t tell if Dr Lillian and Capt Lia were were taking about past events, present events o debriefing a future a future event. You rum story along without nothing change of characters and plot line

Concerning your monster, I know this is sci-fi but can’t believe that a creature could survive in deep space where temperature is absolute zero (-270 degrees F)

Bring on next chapter

@Whitewaterbum

Great feedback! I'm going to prioritize getting the next chapter out but I will definitely consider some revisions in the future to this chapter to address your comments. Cheers and thanks for continuing to read :)

I really hope you finish this! I'm definitely excited to see how Anna interacts with the crew once she is in better condition. All in all, it's great so far!