All Comments on 'In The Bald'

Normally I like dialogue, but this was a real meditative piece. I enjoyed it. Subtle, but erotic.

This is different, but it is extremly erotic! I really enjoyed it! Belle always writes well!

Lovely words and a powerful tale. I was hooked throughout. Great writing!

... hummingbirds. Good luck in the contest.

Lizzy

and nicely written, I'll have to thank Damppanties for putting me on to this story. Good job.

but I couldn't help but feel that there is more to the story. I loved the visuals, and the wolf, but then again, wolves are my favorite.