All Comments on 'In the Darkness Ch. 03 - Abducted'

At the end of 3 we have her in the truck of a car, and we don't know where she is going our will she return later on.

I do want to hear more about her and where is kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

Wow, this series went from kinda hot to SUPER fucked up...I feel really bad for her.

So I wrote this one on my phone while at work because I was really bored (and horny!). I'm sorry if the quality isn't that great and I would love any feedback or comments to do full edit/re-write. I apologize again if this one seemed a bit rushed but I couldn't proofread and edit it properly while at work and I pressed publish because I didn't want to lose the text!

Is her name lily or Rachel. Is this still the same story?

Too dark? I basically wrote this one-off without reading what I wrote. If it's offensive I'll re-publish let me know!

I agree it's dark but don't republish. Sometimes i like to read a dark sex story. This site doesn't have many good ones. I think you should publish multiple stories some riding the line and some dark.

Awesome. I loved it. That is all.

Perfect story, I can tell because it makes me want to be next in line. I can grab your hair pulling your head back as I slap your ass telling you to get your ass up for me. A beautiful little Asian slut who knows her place and has a sweet soft ass for men to own.

Please write more on this story, it is well written and I'm eager for more.

Is is Lily or Rachel? Somewhere the names were changed. Anyway, need to read more about Lily. The thoughts of Lily while things are happening to her is what needs to be highlighted. How is she feeling at certain times? What thoughts are going through her mind while her body is being subjected to rape? Will there be more gangbangs in the future? What other extremes will happen? Will she keep that defiant little voice somewhere that will get her free. Or will she turn into another zombie bimbo like some many other stories. Would like to see some retribution from her on her attackers; or even against her friends that did not protect her.

You know she was fucked by those many men without protection.

I enjoyed reading your story but I am confused on the girls name. She was Lily in the 2nd chapter and now she is Rachel??? Doesn't make any sense and to be honest it ruined the flow you had going. I hope you continue the story. As it stands now it just leaves your readers hanging. But this is just my opinion. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

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I've been submissive for a while in my life and gone with Some VERY Dominant Men. I've been tied up and tied down. Both alone with one Man and at some Sex Parties I was took or invited to. I liked when I'm with a Dom Lover and Trust Him or Them enough to Give Up ALL Control over my body. So I liked this story for that reason. Some Mens liked when I told them I was there Slut and just there to Please them and be Fucked.

Enjoying it so far. Will wait to see how it goes from here. 5 Stars more for the series.

Took a while to realize it is the same girl, can't imagine being used as hard as she has been, and I feel a lot more to come