All Comments on 'In The Forest Away From It All'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I liked the character development, but am confused by the ending. It's clear that in the light of day, Ray returns to his human, but at night, he is a wolf - in mind and body. I am surprised Ray can somewhat remember what his wolf did. But running away is NOT the answer. I think we need a chapter 2. Thesipha deserves better - all that she has done, was done in the name of love. What will happen to her now? Can Ray learn to live with his wolf? Sequel requested, because the story is compelling and interestng.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story and character development. Respectfully, no sequal needed, the finality of the story would suffer

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I’m a young man with an unhealthy obsession with the supernatural. I also like my women dangerous for some reason. Especially since I’m not a dangerous person.