All Comments on 'In the Library'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

So awesome. I think I'm a little like the librarylover99. I can relate! More please.

winedrinkrwinedrinkralmost 3 years ago

great start! I'm excited for Mina...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I hope this is not the end of it ! Very good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Couldn’t get all the way through this because it was a turn off for me. NON CON does NOT equal BDSM. I honestly couldn’t tell what your intent was with this .

Either this is a CNC story which means great no problem it is BDSM, or it’s just another sad blackmail story.

crittergirlcrittergirlalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Sorry you couldn't make it through Anonymous. The stinger at the end was a chat between the two main characters where they started to set up the scene.

Diamondking666Diamondking666over 2 years ago

Ooh! Plot twist! I liked it!

oneagainstoneagainstabout 2 years ago

Nice twist...! I do appreciate a good non-linear storyline.

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I'm a part time student and also working full time, but I write when I can. I hope you enjoy my smut. I welcome comments and feedback! I've been busy with school and work for longer than I'd like, but I hope to be posting again soon!