All Comments on 'In the Moment'

by TreynorWoodWilliams

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peyskippeyskipabout 6 years ago
Excellent!

Hot! Great first attempt!

marriedpervsmarriedpervsabout 6 years ago
Loved it

Hi handsome. I loved your story. I want to fuck Trey!!

gordo12gordo12about 6 years ago
Good first attempt

Lots of good writing in there for a first attempt. 3*

One very minor thing. Cue is not the same as queue and que doesn't exist except in french or spanish.

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