All Comments on 'In The Park, After Dark'

That was so amazingly Hot. What a great story. Apart from the subject matter, your build up of tension to that final wondrous release, was like sex itself. And like any great sexual encounter, I didn't want it to end. There's so much more I'm trying to say about your writing here but the words are all vying for attention at once and stumbling over each other so that I can't get them lined up in any sensical fashion. I look forward to reading more from you.

it is no fun reading a story in the third person, have one of the participants tell it.