All Comments on 'In The Photo Shop'

Really liked the first chapter! Can't wait to read about the party! I always wondered if the poor acne-faced kid from the photo shop looked at the pictures of me and my girlfriends back in HS!

The writing is good but in order to make the party chapter really good, hot and juicy, perhaps you should really move the people around, and NOT do what everyone expects these girls and the couples will ultimately be doing. Get the heat up and get it down in order to finish with a climax or that no one will ever forget. You could work some more fundamentalism in there with men or women in the party "who would never dream of having sex" and who stand around, become so hot that they can't stand it any longer and actually participate in groupies and more.....

Which part did you enjoy writing more, part 1 or part 2?

Can't wait to see what develops in the photo shop! Five stars.

Great sinario. Nicely thought up. Must be great to be able to go from one cum to another like that (as if) but hey it ads to the whole thing MORE please