All Comments on 'In The Redwoods'

Sorry about all the errors. I had to get this in for the contest and I couldn't get any editors to respond to my requests.

I don't usually read fetish stories but this was very good. I have a bit of trouble understanding how someone as sensitive and "great" as Tessa could just disappear from her mother and brother. It seems she has no compassion for their pain of losing her. She claimed to love them but tossed them aside when they became inconvenient to her lifestyle. Yes there were some errors but they were minor. Thank you for the story.

I want this to be a two parter at least so I can go more into depth with Tessa and her family as well as Ashley and Riley's childhood. I just wanted this to stand alone in the contest.