by Hidden_Submissive
That slave sure is enjoying a lot of free service. In my opinion, Madam is more the submissive than the slave. I mean come on, no real dominant is going to do all that work. The writer, who surely must be a male, obviously has no idea what a real Domme relationship would be like. That said, I love his writing! I use his stories when enjoying myself all the time! I wish I knew you, I could show you a really good time!
Thanks Mommabird! Your assessment is likely correct, and I appreciate the feedback. I'd love to hear more from you on how I could do better and learn to better represent Dommes in my writing.