All Comments on 'In The Shadow of The Moon Ch. 04'
by silentlysilly
- 19 Comments
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI love this story. It draws you in with the varied emotions.i felt as if I was there.Well written and excellent plot.Please keep up the excellent writing,I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter Looking forward to the next.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI thought you forgot about your fans...thank you for this amazing chapter.
*****
silentlysillyabout 12 years agoAuthorWhere is the their and there mistake. I would like to say though that mistakes sometimes slip through. My apologies if it occurs more than once.
lonesomedove66about 12 years agoThat was a brilliant chapter. I have read them all now and want to see how this progresses soon... next please!!
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI understand Victoria is in mental pain but there are moments she sounds
kind of selfish .I feel like your making her look like a whining child wanting
everyones antention to her pain.
Besides that, I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
katgoddess1about 12 years agoVictoria has been terribly traumatized by her father, more than her mother appears to be aware of. For her to trust any man is a miracle. It may just be possible for Victoria and Anthony to heal each other.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI agree with anon about Victoria being selfish, yes she has been through a lot, but she does come across as selfish.
However I do love the story, and I think you should do your story justice by getting an editor, there were a lot of times, where you had 'there' instead of what should have been 'their', among other things.
cantfightfateabout 12 years agoVictoria is so conflicted, so damaged, so strong. You just want the best for her. I'm looking forward to more.
Anonymousabout 12 years agothose last two paragraphs were beautiful. I got caught up in that whirlpool of madness myself.
MizTabout 12 years agothis is it, the next chapter has me all caught up. This has been a real joy to read. The pain that Victoria has experienced at the hands of her own father has left her so fearful. That she is even thinking of mating, but then again we are talking about Anthony. He has been done well fighting his anger which hasn't been easy as Victoria's past has become known to him.
Chapter 5 here I come and I will be caught up.
pleasureseeker5about 12 years agoYou delve into Victoria's and Antony's motivations and character so much deeper than the typical werewolf tale does. You really draw readers in and make us care about them--great job!
Rad'labout 12 years agomarred only by the occasional typo or misuse of a word that sounds the same but is spelled differently and has a different meaning.
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