by GeorgieH
You achieved just the right balance. Erotic with a touch of humour, but so believble. I definitely need new shoes ............
I've just finished a shoe shop story, it will be posted tonight...
Such delicious wanton intimacy, and beautifully understated. Well done.
Ahhh! Marvelous! Your diction had such style.! Such.. Unique witty style! XD
What a delightful story. I read this on the Tube on the way into work and the image stayed in my mind for the rest of the day. Perhaps it's time I left my rather boring job in IT and moved into retail!