by LadyTigeress
Hope to see more chapters soon. Am loving this story. You are amazing at capturing the emotions and relaying them to the reader. I truely hope you continue soon.
I hope to see 2 or three more chapters at the very least. This is well written.
cannot express just how i am loving this storyline. You capture many feelings, and show great depth in your characters. Thomas' passing was a little shock right at the end there, but also it was 'heartwarming(?)' in a way, thinking he was giving Marilyn his blessing. xxx
Very well done. I think Thomas held on all those years to give Maralyn a reason to continue. now that she has someone to spend her remaining life with, a new love, he could let go and be at peace. My grandparents had a similar conection. He held on until she was strong enough to go on alone with our help.
that was a unexpected ending of this chapter...but 20 years like that...hard to imagine. i do so love your writings, so well scripted and thought out. i wait till the midnight hour when they post the new stories in hopes there will be one more chapter posted, and then happy there is one more*smile*...Thank you for sharing with us. your fan in Texas