All Comments on 'In the Swing of Things Pt. 01'

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DunkirkDunkirkalmost 3 years ago

He needs to cum in her cunt.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Story definitely needs chpt 2 - incomplete

DanDraperDanDraperalmost 3 years ago

I'm guessing those friends at the end at the bar is going to lead to something a lot more. Good story, I'm looking forward to part 2.

Marklynda2Marklynda25 months ago

Always a little unnerving when the husband walks in, good thing he seemed to know what to expect. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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I'm an amateur writer looking for an outlet. I'm a very sexual person, and this is good medium for me to express myself.

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