by JPhantym
Very very well written..loved how it made my heart pound and touched deep inside at the same time...awesome story..more please!
great theme to the story dude....well written with great images....enjoyed it alot.
great story JP..... love the way your words create a place to escape to...
I love this story. I could read it over and over again and it would still have the same affect on me. Leaves me wanting more...and more....and more....