All Comments on 'In Time for Summer'

this was simply awesome, thanks a lot!

Great story, I hope that there are more chapters in the very near future.

God I want to find a GF like that. Let me take care of “everything” she needs

I. NEED. MORE. :) :) :)

I need a Jenna in my life. Shit any big dick to use me as a fuck toy will do.

I love when I'm being fucked with total abandon like Elliot. I feel satisfied even if my own cock doesn't cum, although I usually do cum when I am fucked long and hard enough. And I would love a Jen in my bed, cumming in my mouth to greet me in the morning. Lovely story. Thanks, sweetie.

How would the story had gone if he did touch her cock at the beginning of page 2?

A girl like Jenna in my life would be sooooo pleasing

Amazing loved it

Please write a sequel or two such a great story!

The chemistry between the bpth of them is absolutely awesome .How they both absolutely love each pther and their bodies .The way Elliot sees Jenna like goddess and especially how Jenna sees Elliot , after all that she shit she pulled , adoring and praising every part of him .It was so cute and every thrust and drop of sweat was so filled with love .Sad we nevee got a proper fellation but , who cares .

Please continue this .

I'd love to read more like this.

Nice job!

I’m sure I’ve read this, or a similar story, sometime before. That’s because it’s such a good story. Have you previously submitted it under another name? In any event I’ve given it five stars.

Honestly this was the best one I think I’ve ever read! Well done, keep it up!

This needs to keep going. A few more chapters at least. Your writing dialogue & wicked humor are a joy to read. Thank you.

I'm not into forced stuff, and I nearly abandoned it when she was ridiculing him, but I'm glad I stuck around.

Wish I had found a gurl like that when I was younger.

To bad I didn't have a Jenna for me when I was younger. I don't know if I would have survived but what a way to go.

Just wanted to post a late thank you to everyone who has commented, favorited, rated or just read this story. I was blown away by the response I received when I posted it.

Unfortunately I have no current plans for another chapter, as this was meant as a one shot, and I feel like I have told the story I set out to. But never say never, I suppose. I might write a short epilogue or something, but probably not a full-fledged chapter.

Damn that was such a sweet story. I love how she had wanted him all along, and glad they both got what they wanted in the end. I was sad, happy, mad, and horny all throughout this story. Love your writing. I love how it was loving and sweet as well as demanding and domineering. Please more tales like this one!

I love this story, and the writing was awesome. Poor Elliot was really sweet, and I could see why Jenna was so attracted to him. The revenge, of course, was delicious.

I wouldn't have minded if you had dragged out the humiliation thing for longer, but I really enjoyed the story regardless.

god damn that was amazing. wish you would write a sequel to this amazing work

The beginning was brutal and cold but it got good after that. The only question I have is why she did it in the first place? Why would she be soo cruel to him if she had feelings for him?

Sorry, words matter. Her brutal mean spirited ridicule of him at the beginning cut him deep enough to make him cry. Her diatribe obvously underscored abuse he has received his whole life. I dont think you can erase that with a gently whispered apology an hour later. Shes obviously a sadist, she clearly got off on humiliating him, her calouse texts to his ex, and shafting a virgin ass with no warm up. And you dont wake someone up with a facial. Her cock must feel really good for him to stick around. Very hot story, but I prefer a kinder gentler seduction

She would have been better off just making him develop feelings for her since she already knew he needed affection. Banging someone every day for 6 months just so he could know she’s a good lay seems silly.

Either way though, love the story!

Hi, I have a question. So I might be reading this wrong, but

> He should have seen the break-up coming. Thinking back to it, Sarah never showed much interest in him, it almost seemed like she had decided to date him out of boredom, or perhaps as some sort of experiment.

Did Jenna set them up with the goal of having Sarah break up with him, while she then would step in to take advantage of the situation? I donno that’s just how I understood this + her saying she only fucked those girls so he’d know she was good at sex + saying that she was sorry she tried to take advantage of him which leads me to think she set up the relationship.

Loved it. I think it would be more better for it the story to have a prologue rather than an epilogue. :)

Superb story. I liked it. Serves that right.

Why didn’t she just ask him out on a date?

Kinda dislike Jenna's character and how quickly Elliot forgave her for the shit she pulled, could have dragged it out a bit to make it slightly more realistic I think. Other than that I loved the story as a whole, more please :)

This could prolly do with a trigger warning, cuz of the emotional abuse bit but other than that i loved it

Yeah that was not a fun ride at all. Emotional abuse doesn't make for a hot story.

very good

Truthfully the verbal abuse is no different then most Shemale/futa/ TS dominate story. Male is wimpy with a small inadequate dick, then raped and humiliated into brain washed fucktoys, then the dom reveals in their misery.

Sometimes when people want something so much we can get overly aggressive and eager. Jenna showed true remorse and sorrow over her abuse. She cam into his room to apologize for how she behaved, of course bringing the lube was a case of being prepared...LOL

I think Elliot realized everything she did was out of her love for him, Elliot never had anyone show much love and want for him.

I do think having Jenna refer to Elliot as her toy and fuck toy instead of Boyfriend is where it stops being a relationship and a dominance thing.

overall great story Thank you

Fucking Hott...

Didn't like the abuse stuff, personally. Turned me off right from the start, no matter the second half of the story. I get that some people have humiliation kinks and that's fine, but to just do a 180 one paragraph later and make it seem like a half-hearted two minute apology would be acceptable and would lead straight to sex was pretty lame. I would have liked the story a lot more had Jenna tried harder, over a few days or weeks, proving to him that she really loved him before they got busy. That's how seduction works. Just my 2 cents, though, and its subjective.

This deserves a follow up... i love this kind of dominant and over-confident women...

Wow, this story was...weird. And not in a good way, either. So we're supposed to believe that months of serious emotional and psychological abuse culminating in sexual assault will then just magically turn into a relationship literally half an hour later? I mean, I know this is supposed to be fiction but come on man, really? If this was going to be a humiliation story, it should have been that all the way instead of being sold as some half-assed romance. It's not even like he enjoyed the humiliation/degradation so the kink wasn't even there for him. She basically just groomed him like a predator would. It was pretty disturbing, actually. This whole story turned me off for the night. Not good.

OMG I'm so jealous an horny at the same time.

I didn't like it.. Being a short person I know how it feels to be talk down to. It hurts. You get angry. Your feelings get hurt. You think no one cares about you. You have no one you can trust, or talk to because it seems everyone hates you. You CAN'T get over that in a few minutes or even in a few days. And you keep remembering what they have said. You just can't trust them to be friends or lovers. Always you wait for them to hurt you again and again. You could have wrote it differently. I almost cried when Jenna started abusing Elliot with just her words. I would have packed up and left. Even if I had to live on the streets. Please Never write this kind of story again.

This story was just mean. I can't fathom how the plot came out like that. The dialogue and actions of Jenna was all just plain cruel, and not in a sexy dominatrix way, but in a total evil bitch way. Then, she expects a weak apology to settle it all, and suddenly he's totally into it? This story made me feel gross. Previous anon said it right. It was like watching a predator groom someone. I'm all for non-con stuff, but huge miss on this one. And what makes it worse is that it COULD have been good. If there had been more romance and seduction involved where Jenna makes it clear over a long period of time that she's sorry and loves him, it definitely could have led into a relationship. But nope. All we got was 'half hour later, they bone'. Lame.

I loved it...giggle wish it was me

Came hoping for romance and seduction as description said. Got some mean-spirited bullshit instead. Hate Jenna. Went flaccid. Bad story.

Alot of people misunderstand why she put up a charade of being so cruel. I mean yeah it was emotionally hurting but thats like telling a fat guy hes fat..or a short guy hes short.. its literally facts. She also explained she just wants him to accept those things so he can move on and live a better life. Its just shes forcing him to face his insecurity and then be better off for it. Her only mistake at the end was she was to aggressive with lust instead of comforting him a bit more and explaining how she likes him.

well atleast what happens after he runs away explains all her humiliating actions. Thats nice to read! Apparently it was something like -> she lusts after him -> sees hes not happy with women/neither are they with him -> makes a plan to make him realize he is a bottom and shouldnt try to top -> brings girls home to fuk and moan so its instilled in him what kind of pleasures she can give -> evt seducing his slut gf and giving the same pleasures and then pushing it in his face to start breaking him -> humiliate him together with the gf to make him angry and sad -> invite him to the beach to make even more fun of him and taunting him into reacting to her-> after the beach scenario she sees him vulnerable and broken -> she starts breaking him even more with words and taunting him-> telling him he is not a manly man and a natural bottom and proving her words by telling him what girls/sluts think of him small/weak/pathetic/small and driving home that he just will never please “normal woman”. Onces hes at the breaking point she inserts herself in the picture and tells him her secret of having a. Cock and how he could satisfy her -> he doesnt understand what she means -> she explains she likes him and wants to love him and give him pleasures and love that he cant find with others -> drives home that point by making him curious about the pleasures she gave the girls/his ex -> he becomes muddles by her aggressive stance and promise of pleasures -> she goes a bit too aggressive and hasty and he runs away not being able to handle everythibg-> she regrets not giving him a moment to process everything -> explains to readers why she did everything.. to satisfy her lust and instill lust/love for her in him -> breaks down because she is sad it didnt work as planned/> she couldnt help it because her lust dominated her senses for a moment and didnt follow the script and didnt realize his need for intimacy wasnt strong enough to withstand his confusing feelings she was throwing on him and how horrified he was of her reveal-> decides to try again and apologize properly and save the situation between if possible and make it up to him. Classic hyperfuta style. Dont compare her to a normal woman.

"Poor Sarah here told me she hasn't had a real orgasm in several months, so I thought I'd do the honor."

So they didnt fuck before this moment? Later on it seems as if she did fuck Jenna while still in relationship with the Elliot?

also how the hell can she humiliate him like that if she actually likes him?

"What, you're just gonna stay in bed and sulk?" Whatd she expect lol? Yeah im perfectly fine with you betraying me and fucking everything up! Shouldve told them to fuck off!

Atleast he has some backbone!

Jenna had gone quiet, realizing that she had brought Elliot to the tipping point. So this was her goal? To humiliate him to breaking point?

Guess she was wrong about him taking abuse without fighting back lol “ "I know I'm pathetic. You don't need to remind me.” Damn hes weak af

You have to realize that you'll never please any girl through normal means." So this is her goal. Making him realize he’ll never ever please normal women.

Say, aren't you curious to know how I manage to bring home a new girl every weekend? Couldnt she have begun the conversation with this? Without stealing his girl or humiliating him? Or did she REALLY have to break him first.

"That little dick of yours isn't going to make anyone orgasm," Jenna said in a sultry tone, showing off her teeth in a wide smile. "But that tight ass might." Here its going from humiliation + seduction finally.

I guess she did need to break him a bit to drive the point that hes a natural bottom slut.

"You're the only one that I want, Elliot, that's why I got rid of that slut of a girlfriend for you. You weren't meant to be with her. You were meant to have my fat cock in your life. I'm not actually lesbian, you know." If she said this before she actually stole his gf and fucked all those women it wouldve been much better. Its clear because he was hyped that she was interested in him.

Brings me to an alternative story where she seduced him while she was with Sarah and then they fuck sarah over. I know its done later on this story but they couldve done it with him on it. Like a relationship without manipulation.

"Really? You really wanna miss out on what made all those sluts keep you up at night?. I guess thats why she did what she did. To show him the pleasures she can give. Couldnt have shown him without making him hear all those moans i guess.

"Sarah enjoyed herself at least, let me tell ya," Jenna cooed, licking her lips inches from Elliot's face. "I lost count of how many times she squirted all over me. Damn near milked me dry too, you should've seen it."

Imagine a guy seducing a girl and telling him how he fucked other women to make her interested in him lol..

"Are you... angry?"

"No."

Hmm why isnt he angry ? At this point he shouldve made her feel guilty for trying to take advantage if him.. In previous paragraphs it was showed he had some backbone?

-Jenna was taken aback from his response, feeling hurt over his assumption, but understanding his scepticism nevertheless. "No, Elliot... I wasn't making fun of you before either, you know.“ in the kitchen she indeed wasnt. I believe her when she said its a charade… however with Sarah she did make fun of him no doubt!

-I... really like you. I know I've been kind of distant during the time we've lived together, but that's just because of my feelings for you. And I'm sorry that it took so long to tell you... but I thought you would be scared of... you know..."

Hmm makes sense, she is confident fucking sluts she doesnt care about but the guy she had feelings for she acts irrationally. Im just wondering what changed for her to suddenly enact her plan after 6 months? Because of Sarah(his ex)? Kind of cool to see the difference, i mean she doesnt know how to properly seduce him because she knew hed be horrified by her dick so she tries to break him and take advantage like she does with sluts and it backfired. Now she realizes honestly talking about feelings is the way to go. Nice!

huh? Despite it being his first kiss, he could already tell that Jenna was a wonderful kisser. Did he not even kiss Sarah? Lol wtf

same power that had driven so many of Jenna's lovers to the brink of madness.

I wish he wouldve asked her why she fuked all those girls if she wasnt lesbian and pleasured them so much. I mean we the readers know from her pov but he doesnt. Wouldve been nice if she told him she did it all to get him and he feels flattered that she wants him SO much that she went trough such great lengths.-> nvm she says this herself later on. Just wish he was curious to ask himself.

It didn't take long before Jenna's cock flopped out onto his own, completely dwarfing it despite them both being at full mast. I guess this is authors fetish since the same happened in motherly grudge.

"I'd let you suck them, but now's not the time," Wish she had justtttt a bit more patience but with her dreaming about him so much and her hyperfuta nature its understandable.

Elliot continued to exceed her every expectation, Its really hot how much she likes his body, how badly she wants him, how she finds him a work of arts, and just how much he pleasures/satisfies her. I guess thats every bottoms sluts dream. Not me though personally am a dom so i identify more with Jenna, just not her hyper nature sadly.

“She hadn't even began to move her hips yet, and already it felt far better than in any of the loose holes of the sluts she had fucked before. She was almost disgusted with herself just thinking about it, as if she had been dirtied just by touching those nasty skanks, let alone fucking them. Elliot however, her sweet little Elliot... he was the perfect partner. Clean, tight, smooth and beautiful like none other.”

Why are these kind of dialogues only in their pov, why doesnt she share this info with him to make it even hotter for him? Alot of authors do that and i dont really understand it.

Atleast she told him why she fuked those whores later. To show him what she was capable of.

You couldn't even take half of me inside that nasty, roast beef-lined hole of yours. Gross." Lmao. Hmm made me think back on he she said she was disgusted fucking those women. They cant even take her dick and all they do is moan in so much pleasure from just half? Anyway no wonder she never moaned herself if that was her experience, cool that with Elliot she was the one moaning and enjoying like crazy.

More accurate titles please. I went into this thinking there would be clever, witty, sexy SEDUCTION. Instead, I got a heaping mound humiliation that just made me sad and a shit transition to sex.

Please update more

What the hell, man?! Why was she so fucking mean?? I detest Jenna so much, I will never be able to like this story because of her. NOT GOOD! And Weezyf, your long-ass justification of some rapist-groomer bitch did not make any sense in the slightest.

Whatever you were trying to do with this one, you missed it big time, man. Made me angry, not horny. I never give low ratings for subject matter, and I still won't here, but damn this was legitimately infuriating to read. This girl deserves jail time, not a boyfriend.

Not good

Missed the mark on this one. Too cruel!

I liked it, but it'd prolly work better if you had shown Jen actually liked the MC through the beginning too, and if you showed more scenes of her feeling guilty over being a massive dick.

Also she didn't need to be THAT cruel, only stupid people are that cruel when being truthful.

very fun story ,,, love how she controlled him in the end and he learned how much he liked it

Wow, lots of predatory behavior in this one mixed in with insults. Not hot in any way shape or form. Also, filming without consent is not cool, at all. Hate the female lead in this one.

Hated this story.

Domt mind the haters this was a well written story that I enjoyed greatly. Most men including myself have a fantasy of being dominated or even forced by big dicked gurl love to see a part 2

Story was very good, and written well. Thumbs up for the author to keep up a good work. Looking forward to read more!

I enjoyed the story. I don’t usually enjoy this type of story but it was well written and drew me along with it. Thank you for the story and looking forward to more. Don’t worry about the negative comments. Please keep writing!

This is great tho how would she have reacted if he had said he was going to move out and get a different roommate? Her plan was kind of contingent on him just putting up with whatever she does. Still my new fav story tho

What a great story. Love the way you write. I'll be reading more...

Not a fan. Made me hate the girl more and more with every sentence. Writing and composition was fine, but the plot and characters were atrocious. Yuck, yuck, yuck.

A story about a shemale whose only concern is having an attractive cocksleave.

I fail to see anything good about the story unless you identify w/Jenna.

Ikr u can't use terrific storytelling to cover up a really basic character that lacks depth all I can say is good luck to people who u decide to fuck in real life

Big. Thumbs. Down.

Wish he had left her there crying and told her to go fuck herself before moving out. At least that would have given us a decent ending. Would've gotten 5 stars from me for that. Instead we got... that. Yuck.

Decently written garbage. Free humilliation without conscent is just disrespectful. I would have kicked her in the balls as soon as she started. This has nothing to do with domination.

Hey it was intresting and a intresting tale keep writing you have some interesting concepts.

Boo! This sucks!

Screw all the naysayers, the sex was pretty good and you wrapped in a kind of plot. It's erotica ffs....if they want Harold Robbins let them go read that.

decent writing but 100% garbage. 'seduced by packing lesbian roomate' more like 'humilated and manipulated by big dicked, shallow,.psychopathic, abusive roomate'. i get that its some people kink, but be honest about it b4 the story starts. try 'her big dicks got nothing on her personality and shell do anything to brutally abuse her crush'

First I just want to say I absolutely love your writing so please don’t take this negatively, this is just some criticism I have.

>She had failed, been way too aggressive. Despite the hundreds of times she had imagined how the scenario would play out, she wasn't able to recreate it. All of her bottled up feelings came out too quickly, she had just been too excited by the thought of spending a night with Elliot, something she had dreamt of time and time again. In the heat of the moment she hadn't even considered that him turning her down was a possibility, she had been so sure that he was desperate for someone to share intimacy with, even if said intimacy came with a huge girl-cock included.

Did she expect him to just drop to his knees and suck her cock? Why would she think cucking him (and then mocking him viciously) would make him open to letting her fuck him? Like, even if he’s horribly desperate for affection surely she should have seen that doing something horrifically evil to him (that would cause most people absolutely hate the person doing it with zero chance at redemption).

At least she realized she went about it terribly, even if she should have realized that 1: fucking girls every week for over 6 months would obviously make him think you’re a lesbian and thus not even entertain the idea that you like him (not to mention her being distant doesn’t real help) and 2: fucking his current girlfriend would obviously make him dislike you and shows you have zero respect for him

Should have had a chapter between this scene and what follows after (they make up/start dating). She didn’t do anything to earn redemption.

IMO the story should have been 3x as long, with the first chapter being everything on the first page to the end of the quoted scene (and probably expanded on with a POV from her perspective), with a second chapter of her doing what she can to earn his trust back + realizing she was wrong and went about it the wrong way + her breaking up with his ex girlfriend (so thought they were still dating, imo the fact she didn’t shows she wanted a backup fuck toy in case he didn’t accept her apology. Makes it feel insincere that she didn’t break it off before coming to see him in his room), and finally the third chapter of them making up and getting together.

Still, despite its flaws I love this story

Wow that might have been the most disappointing story I've read on this site. So disgusting how she acts. I hate this so much.

So good part 2 needed

Shallow, soulless and sad. The premise held some promise,, but poorly written

That's what you call seduction? There wasn't a single part of this story I liked. Except maybe when he told her to fuck off and she went and cried. What a horrible, unlikeable character and a terrible plot. Huge disappointment. I feel like I need a shower after reading that, and not in a good way.

Go look up “seduced” and get back to us. Tag it under cuckold next time jesus

Wonderful storyline and the two protagonist are absolutely adorable. The only problem is it seems like the end of the beginning instead of the end of the story. A second chapter is really needed.

There it a fair amount of criticism in the comments, these people take the story much too seriously, these are not real people, it is fiction, written for entertainment.

How can a person hate a fictional girl for being a selfish bitch? You may dislike the character development but a super bitch was half the story. I am just amazed. 💋

Veronica

Part 2 please and thank you!

This was amazing. Thx n I really want to read a pt 2 of this. Love it. Naysayers can go f themselves

this was great.. i can be more eloquent but why... great is what it was!

Five Stars *****

Please do a part 2!

Nah bro you did this one way wrong. Hate this story tbh

5 stars! Part two please!

Jenna is a dream girl. Love to hear more about these 2. Please write more.

We WANT chapter 2 of this amazing story.

PLEASE

This shit was wack. Terrible "seduction" story.

Ho hum, another dog rape. Another hairless tiny dicked girlyboy. Sure, the seed for a good story was there but it turned into just another dog rape regardless.

She could have at least sucked Elliot off to put him in the mood.

Instead of uplifting a friend and actually seducing him in any romantic way, she hurt his feelings, insulted him, then refused to even be gentle when they had sex. Then she came all over him when he woke up, without his consent. There are no redeemable parts of this story. Just sad to read.

Why do these stories have to be so agressive and degrading, with basicly no consequences. It makes it feel fake and devoid of persobality. Put some fucking backbone in your sub characters ffs

I like the writing and the story was enjoyable for the most part. I just can't recieve the idea that he would just fall in line after being treated that way for so long, and he just seems too meek, I almost feel for the dude. I was compelled to finish it, so not all was lost.

Romantic, in a way, albeit kitschy. Pretty good writing, length. Plot could have been a little more nuanced, but so could about everything on this site (including mine.)

Quite the mixed bag of reactions to this story. Most of the detraction was a bit misplaced by preoccupation with the "roughness," both physical and emotional. I'll grant them that, but reader beware is always the guiding principle here. Live and learn people

This was such a disappointment. It would have been way better if he told her to fuck off and then met another, nicer futa to fall in love with. Instead we get to see an abusive, disgusting fiend get her way. Terrible.

Crappy story. If your wold is that fucked up, I pity you. This story literally sucks!

The story wants us to sympathize with the male character. Unfortunately, the male character acts to illogically and unrealistically that it's just impossible to do so. There is no one who would just make up and stay with such a monster just like that, fundamentally changing their entire personality in a matter of minutes. Similarly, we can't empathize with the female character because she's such a disgustingly selfish and unlikable character. Therefore, this story is a failure through and through. It only made me angry, unfortunately. Sucks because I believe there was promise here but the second half of the action just crippled anything it may have had going for it.

she's female alright... SHE got the emotional abuse down to the minute detail, breaking down a person emotionally and use that state of mind to get what she wants and the call all the disgusting things she does is somehow have to do something with love. let's Hope this story's world have enough serial killers obsessed with this kind of FEMALES, who like to take it slow and enjoy their work of art ...

Sorry, but not one of your best stories, it's like she almost raped the poor guy.

Depressing

Wrong tags

I liked it

Thanks