All Comments on 'In Which an Elven Servant... Ch. 15'

i have with this story is having to stop reading all the time :D on the other hand it is always great to find out the next part is up

You and your story are so stupid. Give up writing

Your story has been really fun to read so far, so don’t let someone who can’t tell the difference between “You’re” and “Your”, who also can’t even come up with a reason to criticise what you’ve written lmao. :)

I wonder what is going on in the head of that silly anon who tries to insult you. Is he or she just inept or unloved, so many possibilities..

Did someone force them to read?

PLEASE WRITE MORE THIS IS GREAT

Lovely little scene, don't worry about those idiots who hate on you your writing is fabulous

I hate stupid people using anonymous to hide their identity, making snide comments like "your story is stupid, quit writing." From the scores from the people who choose to vote, your writing is quite good. There are a few grammatical or spelling errors, 'taught for taut', for example, but on the whole, not horribly bad. One would think by making comments like this, they would be writers themselves, but the vast majority do not write, they only criticize, as if their anonymity makes their criticism more valid? I like the series, you don't have to rush into sex in your writing any more than you have to in real life. Hopefully, the more you write, the better you get. You can't totally depend on word processors to catch mistakes, because a word can be spelled correctly and still be incorrectly used. Keep up the good work. It's imaginative, which is more than most things are.

Gosh, I love this. Your style of writing is very entertaining! Keep that tease & denial smoking hot!