All Comments on 'In Which an Elven Servant... Ch. 34'

This whole series completely fucking blew my mind! So hot! You Sir have an amazing talent to come up with and spell out the most rediculously erotic and boner-inducing thoughts ever.

I could hardly wait for each new post and you never let us all down. Thank you!

forgive my outburst, im no native speaker and might have gone a little over the top there. :)

but this story deserves nothing less!

About time poor Lorelie she waited so long and now back in chastity! I agree it's been a great series. Thank you, great writing,

Is anyone else picturing the house elves from Harry Potter?

it was too little too late. All of the humans are morally bankrupt, which to be fair could have been obvious from the start. He had the opportunity for redemption but failed, he had a willing woman who was clearly in love with him and with whom he professed to care for - and to fuck. Yet he still treats her like shit, I’m not even sure why I’m surprised at that.

I’m all in favour of kink and sex between 2 or more consenting adults is a fantastic thing....and yet he still tormented any non human he could get his hands on. Prick.

Please don't complain about a free story about a human dominating non humans when the author is so obvious about the story line and content expect in their own name. Duh!

Great story. I found Lorelei’s running commentary hysterical. I think the fact that submissive nature is built in with her species makes it more erotic because it’s less unbelievable. Even though she finally got laid, I stilll hope for more of this story.

Favorite erotic series I've read, the commentary was absolutely hilarious. Succubus is best cuckcake

The pay offs are rarely, if ever, satisfying. We get just a few paragraphs of Lorelie finally getting fucked and that's it, the end. This happens every time stories build up sexual tension like this. To make it worse it just skips over the scenes by using the age old "Yeah we fucked a lot" line and glazing over the details.

Oh that's it for Lorelei isn't it. That memory is going to torment her forever. Trapped behind the belt with the memory of her one good fucking.

What a ride. Excellent writing, you're very talented.