All Comments on 'In Your Dreams Ch. 02'

well written

The husband needs to be more involved.

Quite good. Ended up re-reading the last couple of pages. She certainly learned an important lesson. Very sad actually. A follow up involving her husband might be appropriate. Thanks very much.

This can't end well for several of the characters.

Nicely written. However, there is a component missing and an imbalance of karma she should experience....

Great story. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Two women scorned could make for Warren living in interesting times....... or if Louis meets Yvonne..... lots of opportunities.

Chapter 1 was hot, but this just about a shameless whore cheating on her husband. You can't even feel pitty for her when she learns that her lover is screwing her coworker. Hopefully chapter 3 will be better.

Affairs start and end, lovers come and go, and life goes on. Insults and throwing the whore word around doesn't change a thing. Living a life is a one step at a time thing and perhaps some lessons are learned, Louis escaped disaster by the skin of his teeth and doesn't know it.. Good story but maybe a little deeper than it appeared. Thanks for the story.

On fire

Ends without a ending

Ohhhh, poooor her. Beaing cheated upon, can make you really feel hurt. Shi didn'tdeserve that at all

Did not like the jump in time between Part 01 and Part 02. What about Louis’ reaction to her night in Vegas? And how did she decide to continue her affair with Warren when he came into town once a month? Did she feel any guilt at all, or did she take an entitled stance? And, why no ending after she discovers Warren’s duplicitous actions? What happens between her and Louis? On the other hand, to hell with Louis - he was nothing but a wishy-washy wannabe cuck, so fuck him. And fuck her for being a cheating cunt. Doesn’t anybody get their just desserts in this story?

Don't you love it when reality steps in?

As mentioned before, you omitted the aftermath and the reconciliation and conversation with Louis after the night in Vegas.

Where do she and Louis go from here? These things are important in the bigger scheme of things in the relationship

That's it!!! 😡