All Comments on 'In Your Wet Dreams'

by KarennaC

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good

As stated above, good story. Very lyrical, and I'm glad you didn't make them get together in reality. It's better this way.

walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 16 years ago
Great job!

Nice work! Different twist and very erotic!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Reminds me of Dreamscape (1984)!

Your story reminds me of this old Dennis Quaid movie... I haven't thought of it in years. But I saw it when I was a kid, loved it, and always wanted to write some literotica along the same vein. I assume we all write what our personal fantasies are. That being the case, check this movie out if you haven't seen it. It might give you some wild ideas on how to continue this theme (though the story is more of a horror fantasy than an erotic one).

AceStrokerAceStrokerover 15 years ago
Nice

How awesome it would be for a woman like this to be in control of my dreams! It would be nice to hear his perspective as well.

maverick323maverick323almost 15 years ago
Loved it

Really has something, very impressive. The thought of "safe" random promiscuity via the dream world is intriguing, and I love the characters that you used. Very thought provoking, keep it up.

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