All Comments on 'Inception'

OMG Peebudy, you did an awesome job with this story, and working in all the details. I really like how you wrote yourself into the narrative, and could envision myself being stimulated while recounting my dream, and had the most wonderful orgasm while reading this.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

M

One of the best premises, one of the most well written stories I've sent inn Literotica. So erotic! Loved it!! Can't wait to here about the real encounter with Daddy, then maybe with Hubby watching!!

I've never written a chapter 2 before, but this story is generating such feedback that I think I may.

Keep an eye out for a future installment!

-- peebudy

Incredible start , please continue

I have to wonder though, was she dreaming that she was with John, but really she was with Daddy?

Kidding. Very hot!

I loved it. That was a very hot story, and very well written. I love that it is actually based on her real dreams about her father. A touch of reality always makes stories even hotter.

I like the skillful, facile way you coordinated Michelle's dream into the action with John. We're curious what will happen over Thanksgiving. Will Michelle consummate her fantasies/dreams? Inquiring minds want to know. So how about a follow-up.

A fascinating twist on the incest theme, using a dream as the vehicle to tell the story whilst they (John & Michelle) acted out the fantasy or maybe she was remembering what happened. Well written and laid out though a couple of typos (I am much more guilty of these of in my work) hence I now use the wonderful editing skills of the young lady in your story.

Hey it's been ages _ hope you write more in 2018

So exciting, so realistic and I also orgasmed, screaming and shaking. Mmmmmmmm

I noticed a few minor errors but they didn't detract from the story; I'd love a part 2 as well but realize it's not likely now

I know a secret that I can't share, lol

I loved reading this story from both points of view, yours and AlbanyGirls as well. Great stuff. I share a similar fantasy as well.

I still like coming back to your stories. Hope your ok

Luv ya -x-