All Comments on 'Incessant Pt. 03'

at this point I'm like do they even want or have affection/love for him any more?

Mom and blake emily and riley ? and the moment someone shows even a little interest in him he gets an elbow in his side lmao whats even happening?

Hey, thanks for taking the time to leave feedback, I really appreciate it! Sorry that you’re feeling disappointed with the story. I’m afraid I don’t quite understand your comment though, and would love to hear more. I’m still growing as an author and sequels are hard, but I feel the affection between the characters is still verg much there : )

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P.S. I hope you’ll read next week’s part. It’ll be shorter because of Christmas, but contains what I think are a few lovely scenes.

My fault you're right there is affection and love I worded that wrong ,the way you wrote it tho seemed like they were kinda moving away from him and doin their on thing and not really giving him any attention emily and riley got their own thing goin on yes she does show him love it just doesnt seem like that love is as strong any more, same with mom and blake and the way you described moms night with that girl /lady of the night😂 it looked like her soul passion was focused on just blake and not the others . I think I'm just thinkin to deep about this lol either way it's your story and everything's been great so far and I'm just here for the ride💯

I refer to my earlier comment

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