All Comments on 'Incest Love Affair Ch. 03'

this needs detail and longer chapters. as is all three chapters should have been posted as one stand alone story or as the first chapter of a longer story. as a writer you failed it was not erotic or interesting and you had a lot of repeating with no detail, delete and have a GOOD EDITOR help you rewrite it THEN it might be worth reading.

That’s it? I really liked it but what happened next?