All Comments on 'Incest Therapy Ch. 01'

There are more chapters. Pretty good for a first attempt!

I wasn't distracted by any writing errors - apparently you proofread (or had someone else do it) prior to your submitting your story. Your story could have been longer for the first submittal, but future chapters must follow soon so as to not have your readers loose track of the sequence of events.

Until the next chapter . . .

I don't think watching your legal age step-daughter masturbating really counts as incest.

The step daughter is aware and enjoying ever step she takes.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Nice first effort!

In terms of feedback, watch your sentence tense and make sure it remains consistent throughout. The story shifted from past to present then back again. Also, the story started out with her happy to see him “again” but from the way he laid out his description with his step dau, it sounds like this was their first visit. Lastly, watch for run-on sentences and paragraph spacing.

Hope this helps. Keep writing! On to check out Chapter 2!

@Anonymous that put the title NOT EXACTLY INCEST

Technically by law step and in law family count as incest because when you get married you are bringing 2 families together to form a union between the 2 families. Of course I'm sure charges will vary depending on different state laws across the country