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by HighLumin

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ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
Bismark the Botched up dog

This story is so bad, I'm the only comment.

No one wants a story about a dog that acts like this one. It is nasty and ugly and rude. There is nothing good about this story The characters are flat and have no character at all and all it is, is a bully story. No one likes a bully.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Atypical looser husband story....but with a canine twist 4 stars

More....how bad does it get for the exhusband and the 3 women? I hate seeing wimp husbands but he brought this on himself. Could we possibly write a happy ending for him?...new woman...kills boss...sues company....you decide.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Yuck!

What is the point.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Chapter 05

Chapter 05 has vanished.

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