All Comments on 'Indecent Connections Version 02 Ch. 10'

I love this story. I hope you keep the nipple piercings in the story and maybe add a clit piercing. I think that would be so hot. I would also love for Ava to get a tattoo either as a tramp stamp or across her pubis that says, "Property of Master Aiden."

This is a fantastic multi-part story that just commands the reader to continue! I could write so much more but I see that many others have throughout the revised series (Good work at that!) so I'll not repeat them all.

The only critique I would add to the effusive praise this series so justly deserves is that a good proof reader would help. There are places where a letter, and sometimes a word, is missing which could be caught and corrected by a mildly attentive reader. It SEEMS as though you may have been using a voice-to-type app. If so, it would explain a couple of apparent homophones I've detected in 3 chapters (I think!) or so.

As my previous comments reflect, these are very minor issues and don't detract, at ALL, from the excellent quality of the stories! Please, keep it up!

X-Man

Please add more! I love this story!