by Stephen0628
I know it was just a piece of escapist fluff, but even so the plot and method should hold up. The snake in the box under the chair was just nonsense. How did it get there ? How did Manjit know she would be invited in and that Claire would sit in that specifc chair ? The rest of it was quite good and I enjoyed it, so please continue the adventures of Claire.
Spelling and grammar left much to be desired. Plot was somewhat contrived and loose. Many aspects of story diddn't read welol. Hard to follow too.
Don't continue the story on my account.