All Comments on 'Indian Harem Ch. 08'

Hope folks like this story. Any feedback is welcome. Am working on improving my writing style.

Also, any suggestions for future chapters are welcome. (Most of the story is already plotted but any good ideas can be incorporated)

Maybe if the son would keep his dick in his pants for 5 minutes, he may actually truly fall in love with one, ok maybe two girls. Then save the company, as a Priority in his life!!

Enjoying it so far, looking forward to more.

I do worry that if he is clever at hacking that he does not recognize the need for more security against his being discovered or monitored. For example, he knows that his targets have used hidden cameras in their past exploits so why is he not checking for his own secure locations?

Ignore some of the comments. This is erotica so sex description is important, if people don't erotic encounters then they should not be on this site. Now that's out of the way; it's good to know that most of the story is plotted, there are some writers on this site that just wing it and never know how to complete stories.

If any suggestion I could make is that the story title says "..Harem" so it's not complete with 2 girls, I'm sure you have planned few more characters to join the harem. I'd say keep up the story plot of saving the family business while building up the harem and update as frequently as possible.

There Harem part will start in the next chapter.

When’s the next chapter coming? Loved it

Hey, it's been a couple of weeks since the last chapter. When's the next chapter coming out?

Hey, where have you disappeared to? When will the next part be released? You mentioned last time that you are working on outline the plot and you will be able to churn out stories faster.

This author is working on multiple stories simultaneously, which in my opinion affects the quality though so far in this series the author is able to show his ability to handle such. Only issue I see is the delay in writing while his focus moves to other stories. - I wish that authors write one story at a time.

Almost a month now...

Waiting for the next chapter

Yet another unfinished series :(

Don't delay so much

People forget about the story then.

Eagerly waiting for the next part it's been a month now

It seems like it’s taking longer than expected. Here’s the update from author’s bio:

“ Sep 20, 2023

Indian Harem 09 is almost finished.

Writing has been slower due to some personal commitments. Will try to finish it by this weekend”

Writer please quick update

day 455 of asking update on Indian Harem,

stop others series please this is your best work

We understand that you've not been able to get the time, but whenever you do please finish this whole series first, this is the best plot you've written.

Past 9 is uploaded. It ended up being much longer than earlier installments. Sorry for the delay.

My pessimistic mind thinking pessimistic thoughts about how pooja hold ravi back up

You have got talent, but your material has the stench that every non native english speaker has, that puts me off, you will always remain a mediocre author at best.