by vegitto306
And you've gone and spoiled the whole series with this chapter now. The story title itself has 'harem' word but the chapter starts with Pooja cheating on Suraj (in a way) and then you have the sharing/swinging. Why did you even put harem in the story title bro ?
This is just my opinion. The chapter was just not my cup of tea. And if it was any hint, the future chapters will have even more sharing etc.
(And before others come at me, if the author had not included the word harem in the story title, i wouldn't have written this comment at all.)
@anonymous - without giving the future plot away.
I'll just say that the Harem in the title will be fully justified in future chaptersđ
My comment about this chapter is that since it was about 2 months from last chapter, the beginning was appropriate to tie back to previous chapter, no complaint there. I was thinking that Tara would be the next one to join the harem and somewhat disappointed with that but there is still time for that.
My biggest complaint about the chapter is that there was hardly any progress on revenge plot, yes Suraj got Iliana but there was nothing more on that front. I hope that next chapter will be balanced in sex and plot. And finally it will be published sooner.
Everything was good until the colab bro, harems are to be kept as harems only, so despite the plot going where you commented it is, still it is a bit weird.
Onto the next part please.
Loving it until now! Keep the good stuff coming, although you could spice it up a little by making the plot edgier rather than letting everything work out so smoothly in the protagonist's favour. The inclusion of some hardcore & blackmail themes would be appreciated as well. Good work nonetheless!
I love your story is great so far, but after 9 chapters the plot has really hasn't moved very much. If there was no Mention of sex, the plot would only fill half a page, of the first chapter. We get it he's a stud with a 12" cock that's got to use it every other Paragraph. Oh it would have been so very much hotter if Karan, and Suraj would have switched Partners for just a Little while, and fucked their sister's, this story would have real started on fire. Now the question is what happened to the girl they Rescued? And I Suspect a whole page of Suraj fuck her too!!