All Comments on 'Indian Harem Ch. 16'

by vegitto306

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xysterxysterabout 1 month ago

Finally, it is out. I hope you figured out the issue for future reference. Your story is progressing well. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as we enjoyed reading it. It was well worth the wait. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Seems complete filmy episode.. Finally suraj got some lesson but still much more to go..

Eagerly waiting for next update

geek_writergeek_writerabout 1 month ago

Can't wait to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Hoping there's going to be a hard rough gangbang next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Interesting twist at the end of the chapter, assuming the story is not turning to tragic end, we'll be eagerly waiting for what happens next to Suraj and Nora hoping that they can somehow, escape and continue the series of building his harem and completing the revenge.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Kindly tell me when is next part coming....... eagerly waiting!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great story. Look forward to Nora's gang bang. Make it rough and kinky please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I was wondering when this action scene was going to happen for a while, lol!

You do have a good talent for writing despite making a few mistakes with the names. You are able to pace the story well, create cliff hangers and engage the audience with the sex as well. If you are able to post the story chapters a bit quicker then I'm sure you would not lose any readers as the long wait does indeed make one lose interest.

~ A devoted Reader (Ruby Black)

Nity_98Nity_98about 1 month ago

Don't make a senseless gangbang that'd ruin the story, so far it has been just amazing one of the best reads over here of mine personally...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

When is next one coming pls notify us author ji

vegitto306vegitto306about 1 month agoAuthor

Writing the next part. Half done I guess

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Definitely looking forward to some deviation from the monotony of all action happening through Suraj now. Keep up the good word, linearity in plot with interesting twists such as non con & blackmail would make up for a tempting read now. You've built the characters well, now let them shine through their copulations.

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

Updates on the next part?

AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

Are we in for another long wait?

AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

Hey man update us

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

Updates????

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

15 days ago, you said the next chapter was "half done"! Has it been "done to death"? What's going on?

vegitto306vegitto30617 days agoAuthor

Hi everyone,

The next chapter will take a week or two more.

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

A week or two more!! Sad, man!

AnonymousAnonymous9 days ago

Updates?????

vegitto306vegitto3069 days agoAuthor

Next chapter is done. Will publish it tomorrow and then leave it for the moderators to approve.

AnonymousAnonymous6 days ago

Next chapter??

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Returning author. Used to write on other forums years ago and starting to write again. 1st May - Next Chapter on Indian Harem is uploaded and should be out out once approved by mods

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