by vegitto306
Finally, it is out. I hope you figured out the issue for future reference. Your story is progressing well. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as we enjoyed reading it. It was well worth the wait. :-)
Seems complete filmy episode.. Finally suraj got some lesson but still much more to go..
Eagerly waiting for next update
Interesting twist at the end of the chapter, assuming the story is not turning to tragic end, we'll be eagerly waiting for what happens next to Suraj and Nora hoping that they can somehow, escape and continue the series of building his harem and completing the revenge.
Great story. Look forward to Nora's gang bang. Make it rough and kinky please.
I was wondering when this action scene was going to happen for a while, lol!
You do have a good talent for writing despite making a few mistakes with the names. You are able to pace the story well, create cliff hangers and engage the audience with the sex as well. If you are able to post the story chapters a bit quicker then I'm sure you would not lose any readers as the long wait does indeed make one lose interest.
~ A devoted Reader (Ruby Black)
Don't make a senseless gangbang that'd ruin the story, so far it has been just amazing one of the best reads over here of mine personally...
Definitely looking forward to some deviation from the monotony of all action happening through Suraj now. Keep up the good word, linearity in plot with interesting twists such as non con & blackmail would make up for a tempting read now. You've built the characters well, now let them shine through their copulations.
15 days ago, you said the next chapter was "half done"! Has it been "done to death"? What's going on?
Next chapter is done. Will publish it tomorrow and then leave it for the moderators to approve.