All Comments on 'Indian Landlord vs The Tenant Girls Pt. 03'

A very long list of rather clinical descriptions - "he lay on top of me and inserted his pecker inside me". He did this and I did that and we did it in the house and against a wall and in the car and on the ground and in the pool. Missionary position, blue tablet, blowjob, cum.

All tell and no show.

This man is old and looks like Shrek so I'm finding it hard to imagine that two young women are willing to engage in sex with him constantly. It makes no sense.

"She should be an erotica writer as her description almost made me cum with excitement."

It certainly did nothing for me. Also, I would advise you to find an English-speaking editor.

One of the best stories on Literotica. Great going!

Please continue the series with more exhibitionism.

ur the best. please keep writing.. try to write in a gangbang

Can you make a part 2 to buggering the burgaler story !!!

Do continue and please get an editor.

Long wait but no fourth part....

Thank you for writing this and looking forward for more!