by hornygirl6996
I'm starting to think that the reason there are so many Indian whore stories, is they had no other choice, after British occupation by thousands of betas for so many long years. Their fucked up culture is like cancer.
Dark Indian female + strong White male = a strong mating magnet. Allan needs to knock up Sandeep's mom in the next part, then take the beta husband's family away from him.
A hope for a better ending than original.The beginning of original tale was very good, but Epilogue looked hushed.Why Sandeep returned to India if he was well acepted by Allan and he looked at his father as a loser?Didn't make any sense in original plot.
The only reason I ended my story the way it ended was, I wanted to keep it as realistic as possible. Hornygirl6996 has started it great though. Please continue the great work.
Excellent.Strong white men having sex with indian women is my favorite thing.I am so glad u didn't turn in into a dumb incest story with Sandeep having oedipus feelings towards his mother.Instead you portrayed that he is proud that his mother is a woman of a strong white man.I am happy to help you write next parts
I have already written couple of paragraphs. I am happy to share if you are interested
I can't dream of such an event in front of my son....surely intimidating story...chennaishobs